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Movie Review.

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Erin’s diary

Dear, Diary.
Yesterday, I couldn’t sleep. I was so excited for my new job at Wilson High School. I had a good salary and free coffee everyday. I just tried to prepare for my new lesson well on the first day. I also hoped my students will be hard-working, obey a teacher and pay attention in my class. I loved this job, and I hoped my students also loved their teacher. I tried to put in my head some jokes because I was so nervous. In the last morning, I tried to practice in front of my mirror when I meet my students on the first day. But I never saw them and they also didn’t meet me. How can make they think I am the good teacher? I just sat quietly, and let my head tried to imagine all of the face of my students. It was 1 o’clock. Finally, I fell to my dream and started to dream about my students. “Ring…. Ring….” This is the sound of my alarm-clock. It means now is 7 o’clock. Oh!! My god. I just have one more hour to prepare everything and go to Wilson High School. I get up and jump out of my bed. I seemingly recognize inside my head has some forces. And it helps me work quickly. I wash my face, brush my teeth, comb my hair and get dressed. Today, I will wear red clothes. I think it will help me act like as another teacher. I also wear the pearl necklace. It is the necklace of my father. So I respect it and I want to wear it on my important day. But the vice principal also tells, “You shouldn’t wear it when you teach your students and I don’t sure I can take it back for you.” Why does she say like that? I try to think. But I stop this thinking because my head become headache. Finally, I spray little perfume on my body. I go to downstairs and meet my husband. Now, he also prepares for me the breakfast. He looks at me and says, “You are so nice.” I love this day, I also wait for this day long time ago. I say, “Good Bye! Honey.” and drive to my car to Wilson High School. Today is so noisy in the school yard. In the school, I see a lot of students. Especially, I meet almost is the color students like as Asian, Latino, Spanish or African American. The sunlight shines to my face. I think it wants to welcome to Wilson High School. I go to the room of teacher and the form of my students at the shelf has the number is R.203. All teachers take a look at me. I feel so nervous. I also hear my students are so terrible. Everybody thinks I just waste my time to teach my students. But I think I can help them and improve their English skill. And I don’t care all teachers talk about me. I go to R.203 and wait my kids. My room is not really nice. But it’s OK. All the tables have a lot of handwritings. The blue board for all activities of the students in the class doesn’t have anything. I palpitate with fear but I start to write my name on the board. I wait my students and practice to say’ “Hello” or “Hi” when they come into the room. “Ring ….ring ….ring “now it is 8 o’clock. I try to breathe deeply and stand in front of my room to welcome them and wait. But when a minute hand moves to #2, it is 8:10 but my kids don’t appear. I come into and pray for the God. Finally, they appear and come into and I say, “Thanks, God.” I stand up and say Hello with the kids. My students are nearly 98% are the color students. And in the class just has one white boy. He is coward. Then, I start my class by starting attendance. I hope my pronunciation well when I read all name of my students. At that time, I notice one Latino or Spanish girl. She wears a pair of boot and this one is only the jail has it. Her face becomes angry when I read her name is wrong pronunciation. Next I introduce myself and start my lesson. During this period, I’m bored when my students don’t unite together. They separate like as the group. If you have same the color skin with them, you will be the member of your group. My students don’t pay attention. Someone talks loudly, sleeps or reads some magazines and eats. At this time, I know the good thing I can do for the kids is keeping them in the class. But they stay in the class; they will have a fighting and say bad words. What can I do? When the period ends, I recognize tomorrow I must teach them how can they raise their hands when they want to ask?

Dear, Diary.
Today, I’m tired but I feel happy when my kids become kind and respectful. Today, my father and I help my students understand about the Holocaust and the lives of all the kids die in the war. My kids seemingly recognized everybody needs them so they must care about themselves and believe themselves. They also meet the real people live and remember about the Holocaust? Now, my kids start to read about Anne Frank’s diary. I hope they will think deeply after they read this book. But I also hope my husband will forgive me because I don’t care him so much. At this time, my students need me. I still love him and remember him.

Movie Review.

Part 1:

“Unbelievable!” That’s a word I can tell you after I watch “Freedom Writers”. I seemingly recognize the distance between a white people with a color people is so far in 1994. “What’s happen when the school has all the gangsters?” Freedom Writers is a good movie and bases on the real story at Los Angeles- Long Beach. And it tells about the teacher has all hopes in her job. She wants to teach her students “How do they live? And the world also needs them.
In the movie, you will meet again the famous face “HILARY SWANK” with two times received Academy Award winner. She is successful with many movies as the boxer “Million Dollar Baby” or a transgender in “Boy Don’t Cry”. And at this time, she will appear with the new job and she will be smoother. You will see her in “Freedom Writers”. And the producer will be MTV and Paramouth Picture.
The settings happen in 1994 at Los Angeles – Long Beach. These places have the large population like as American, Spanish, Latino, Asian and Mexican. And the conflicts between people with people also have a lot of problems. The reason is the color skin. After that, these are the cause’s make the kids become the gangsters.
Freedom Writers get B+ but almost nearly A. Its acting exposes almost the feelings between the color students with the new white teacher (acted by Hilary Swank). A lot of problems happen on the first day when Erin-the main character become the teacher. Her job helps the naughty students improve the Reading and Understanding skill. “Gangsters, Fighting, Shooting” are the words she can describes her students. Almost her students stay at least one more time in the jail or one member of their family, their friends die before their face. Does Erin Gruwell continue her job? Do the students focus or participate their education when they meet Erin Gruwell? The movie also tells the truth about teenagers, racism and their situations. All main characters act in the movie very well. Especially, the teacher –Hilary Swank shows a lot of her feelings like as her real live. When she is angry because the passed paper teases her male student, she impresses a lot of conditions she wants to say. She tries to make her kids think deeply about their education. Sometimes, when she is happy she makes her kids smile. She tries to create some games to helps them. Besides, in the movie, I also like Eva- the naughty girl and has the revenge with the white people. She hates her life. So she tries to forget “who is she?” I like her acting. It will makes you has more feelings about her situations. Her brother dies because someone shoots him. Her father catches to the jail with the white people. So she hates the white people. I think she is so strong and brave because if I am her, I will die for sure. Then, in the movie, you also see a lot of conversations. With the conversations, I can learn some slang languages. OK! I will show you. “Ma” this word means is respecting someone. But I like the conversation is the students and the teacher meet Miep Gies- the woman hid Anne Frank in the Holocaust. Someone in the class says, “You are my hero when I start to read this book.”
“No, no. I am not a hero. It’s my job and I think I must do that.” Miep Gies replies. After that, she says “You are the hero, and the hero of everyday!” I remember this conversation. I think the students also think they will be over of their lives if they try and complete their job. Besides, their teacher also shows them in the Holocaust, the kids meet a lot of hard things than them, but the kids hope
they will be alive. They believe everybody needs them. That’s why? It makes all students changes their mind. And they think they live for their hope and their dream. Next, I also like the music and the sound. Music is fit with the scene very well. It gives a lot of senses to make the watchers understand. I love that movie. That movie tells me the thinking of teenagers and I also recognize how all hope with the job of the teacher is? I think the movie is so cool and you try to guess How about the final part of the movie? What will she do after her kids graduate?
I want to see it again. I hope you will have a good movie review after you watch this movie. Of course, you will have the good introduction about the movie for the next watchers.

Dear Diary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DearDiary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Curse” is a world; it is making everybody trembles and shakes. Do you believe your school has a curse? Or you can know, you will be dying on the day the curse appears. Do you believe about the curse? And the school had the curse is………..
American International School (AIS) was a famous school in 1913. Everybody didn’t know where is the school? So it was an ancient castle, each story happened inside this school, made this school become interesting. It also attracted the students wanted to find the mystery inside this school. I wanted to share a diary of the new girl student. She applied to this school in 1963. Let see!!! What‘s happen inside the school and her?

Dear Diary…….
On Monday, September 15th, 1963
I’m so excited. Today, I start to study in a new school. My family is so happy with this news. AIS is the traditional school and this school is the good place to help you become the good student. But I feel this school isn’t normal. I feel like that because I am just the normal girl. I don’t study well like as my brother. I just love to play the piano. How can I apply to this school? Or may be, the school has a mistake between me and my brother. I don’t love math, literature, history………how can? But the letter of school has my name clearly: Ressy Zheng. From a day has this letter until now, my brother isn’t talking with me. He is angry about this decision. I feel sad. Good Bye!!! I must go to school.

On Tuesday, September 16th, 1963
Today, I meet some good friends: Mark, Patt, Kelly. They have the hobbies like as me. They love to play instruments. Mark plays the flute, Patt plays the violin, and Kelly play the piano. But they stay different houses. In the school they have 4 houses: Kylin, Dragon, Phoenix, and Tortoise. Especially, I have a different education. I don’t think I am special. But I can touch everything: book, notebook or pencil. Everybody studies a lot of subjects but I just sit and try to open a box. The headmaster also says when I can open this box I can participate with my friends. I feel “No Idea”. My brother still keeps the anger with me. I wish I can switch for him.

On Wednesday, September17th, 1963
I start to feel some problems inside this school. The 6th sense always tells, “I need to go away this school.” But what‘s happen? May be, I feel alone when I have the different education. I try to make me more confidence. I want o quit this school. But I can not because my parents will be hopeless. This is a dream of my parents. I can’t do that. What do I can do now? I don’t have anybody to share with me. I also can’t meet my best friends. Now, I just know my job is opening the box.

On Tuesday, September 23rd, 1963
Why do you don’t answer me? I start to feel alone. I want to cry but I can’t. Today, my friends tease my curly hair. All of them say, “I’m a strange person.” This school makes a lot of fears for me. How can I continue to learn? I want to share with my parents. But they don’t listen to me. They always say, “AIS is the good school, all of students are genius. You can’t say like that.” They don’t believe me.

On Friday, September 26th, 1963
Today, I go to the library to find how can I open this box? But I can’t find. I find the history book about this school. I want to read this book. But the librarian takes away and kicks me out the library. Why does she take away? But in my thinking, I want to read this book. So in the lunch time, I go to the library and steal this book. I take this book to a dirty class at the 3rd floor. I open this book and read. Finally, I feel happy when I can find what do I want to see? But my eyes doesn’t notice to the way can open this book. It makes me more curious when I read about an ancient curse. I go to the next page. I surprised when I see my name in this book: “Ressy Zheng – the 13th ghost. What’ does it mean? My name is on this book. But may be it is not my name. But the family name is same. How can? I try to forget that one and continue to read. I obsess with all these words. I start to feel something happen behind my back. I wait one minute, turn around and see……………

Be continuing!!!

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